Hazel you have included some key examples of planning and research - well done. Your textual analysis shows a good understanding of the ways in which meanings are constructed. In particular your use of feminist and marxist theories is well considered. It would be a good idea to include a Youtube link for each text you have analysed so that readers of your blog can view what you have analysed.
I'm happy to see that you have included some photographs that you may use for the Digipak. Nicely composed but now think about mise en scene carefully before you do a 'professional shoot'.
Targets: work through your checklist to complete additional tasks. You should also include screen shots of the editing of your music video to demonstrate work in progress and any revisions you and Kamika decide to make.